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He wasn't sure what exactly happened, one minute he was jumping tree branches keeping up with the others heading back to the Akatsuki base, next thing he knew he was lying on his back with an aching back and head and a mysterious weight on top of him. He looked up to see a pair of soft brown eyes gazing into his. The stranger's eyes were dazed for a moment, then widened.

"Oh my God I am so sorry!" The brown eyed Stanger scrambled of Dein, her small face flushed red. Dein pulled himself to his feet and looked at the girl. She looked no older than 17. Her wavy black hair fell just past her thin waist. Her headband told him she was from the village of the mist. She looked up at Dein, her brown eyes full of embarrassment.

Dein couldn't help but look into her eyes, for they were the most beautiful eyes he has ever seen in his life. He always liked brown eyes. "Umm….are you okay?" Dein; realizing he was staring, looked away, a sea of red filled his cheeks. "Err…yeah, I'm alright. Are you okay?"

The girl looked at him with slight confusion before realizing what he meant. "Oh! Yes, I'm okay. Sorry about that, missed my footing on a tree branch and slipped, ha-ha," She smiled sheepishly. Dein managed to smile a bit. "It's alright, I wasn't paying much attention myself either." She smiled; Dein liked her smile, it was sweet. "Well, I have to get going, mission and all. Oh, my names Naomi, just to let you know." Dein nodded. "Well it was nice to meet you Naomi, I'm Dein" With that, Naomi disappeared into the trees.  Dein jumped into the trees to meet the other paths, Kein and Gein.

As they left, Dein couldn't help but smile, in hopes he would run into Naomi again soon.
Okay folks, I have posted something! :la:

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Here are some important notes about the fanfic I had just written:


1. the story is a naruto fanfic everyone, so if you dont know who dein is, search up paths of pein animal path, Its the pein with the long ponytail. Please dont ask me why his name is dein for I do not know. Its just what came up when I searched pictures of him 030 Kein is the pain with the long hair and gein.....I forgot, I think hes the fat one. Like before, thats what came up when I searched them, so please do not ask me.

2. the characters in this story might be a bit OOC (out of character) and I apologize for that.

3. The girl that Dein meets is not going to be a OC, shes just a character I came up with while eating chicken soup 030
EDIT: O3O after some thinking, I guess she is a OC, but only for this story ^^

4. I might be posting chapter 2 if I get good reveiws on the story.
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thats mainly it, so I hope you like the small fanfic I had written.

The paths of pein belong to the awesome creater of naruto Masashi kishimoto

Naomi belongs to me
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:iconpikagirl111:
thats was a awesome story nice work:)
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Waterbender129 Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks sis :S
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xChikushodo Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh, and just a note, Dein's real name is Chikushodo =P The one with the long hair, the human path, is Ningendo, and the fat one is Gakido. Just in case you wanted to know their names...xD;
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Waterbender129 Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I didnt know that, thanks for telling me <3 Its nice to know that :)

you get a cookie :cookie:
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xChikushodo Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Ooh, one with Dein instead of just Pein 8D I like it so far. I wish he could meet me..;-;
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Waterbender129 Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you :D BTW I love your Icon :)
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xChikushodo Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Hehe, thanks ^^ I'm obsessed with him..=3=;
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Waterbender129 Jan 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL XD I luv him too! He's like, the best of all the peins!:worship:
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